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Post by Fredrex00 on Jan 9, 2008 21:08:49 GMT -5
Discuss Book 1 here...please....
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Talk with me people. Need some advice -.-;
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Post by Talon on Jan 9, 2008 21:14:53 GMT -5
Well, I like it, but it's much too short! The idea is excellent, and the dialogue is decent, but your sentances are a wee short.
Other than that, I hope to read more! SOON! *cough*
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Post by Fredrex00 on Jan 9, 2008 21:19:51 GMT -5
Well, this was back in the day....waaaaaaaaaaay back in the day....when I was still a noob at writing...so...yeah..I might revise the other chapters...since they look like I had no idea about Evangelion when I was writing it...
<_>
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Post by lordnidhogg on Jan 11, 2008 21:06:22 GMT -5
Well it's reasonably well written...and it has Godzilla in it...
But there isn't enough to form an opinion off of. But I must warn you: I do not like Evangelion at all, so don't go looking for too much praise from me once the mechs appear.
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