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Post by shdwdrgn on Jan 8, 2009 22:37:31 GMT -5
Well here it is the prologue to what I hope will be a sucessful CtS side arc. Hopefully it'll keep coming with your support because I had fun writing it. Well go ahead and let me have the good, the bad, and the ugly(but be nice about this last one please).
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Post by Azure_Ghidorah on Jan 9, 2009 0:28:50 GMT -5
Prolouges tend to be the indicator of a good fic, and this one turned out quite well.
Similarities between yours and mine are to be expected, due to the nature of them being the same neck of the woods, as it were, but you have done marvellously in making decent enough changes in order to differentiate it from mines, like having the new Shadow Zinv appear before he... well... appears. The two Zinvs syncing up like that was a nice addition.
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*akward silence*
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Anyways, brilliant so far and as anticipated. Godspeed to you in writing up the first chapter.
Oh, and to be honest... If I thought you would introduce Shadow Zinv so early, I would have expected another surprise 'out-of-nowhere' appearence like with Shiryu and Mercurio. This introduction, though, was much better.
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Post by Azure_Ghidorah on Jan 12, 2009 20:05:20 GMT -5
It's... a very strange feeling for me when a new chapter is posted in the actual fic thread and the discussion thread is not updated to show...
>.<'
Oh well.
Its a great chapter so far, things seem to be spot on where they should be, and feel as right as they should be where the changes must be made.
Would say more, but theres not a whole lot else to comment on.
Till the next chapter/episode.
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Post by shdwdrgn on Jan 12, 2009 21:18:35 GMT -5
phew turned out better than I had hoped. I had trouble writing myself into this one since it was such a one on one episode.
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Post by Talon on Jan 14, 2009 0:13:06 GMT -5
Well, I must say, this is going rather well! I'd like to see a bit more use of comma's, and explanations as to who's talking at a time, but I like everything else about it! I seem to enjoy the prologue the most for some reason... hmm. Ah well. I want more now, damnit! *brandishes rolled-up newspaper*
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Post by shdwdrgn on Apr 7, 2009 14:59:37 GMT -5
It has finally landed, yes! It's Chapter 3 of 'A New Parallel'. Please read and enjoy then do your usual thing.
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Post by shdwdrgn on Jun 11, 2009 17:36:30 GMT -5
That's right people Chapter 4 has finally arrived after the long ass wait I put you through. So you better enjoy the damn thing and hopefully Chapter 5 will be following soon.
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Post by shdwdrgn on Jun 21, 2009 14:21:02 GMT -5
We's on a roll now Chapter 5 is out and ready to be sucked in by you. As always enjoy it, let me know what I can improve on and content suggestions are nice too.
So have at it boys!
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Post by shdwdrgn on Jul 19, 2009 15:34:26 GMT -5
These past couple of chapters have been filled with awkwardness. This one is no exception. Just glad I don't have to go into school with them damn that would drive me batty.
So read it, disect it, and then rave or complain about it. Do what ya gotta do.
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Post by shdwdrgn on Apr 12, 2011 20:05:57 GMT -5
YOU ALL HAD BETTER COME BACK FOR THIS BECAUSE I'M KICK STARTING THIS shit AND COMPLETING IT BY THE END OF THIS SUMMER!!!
The oddball moments, crazy antics, off the wall mech battles, and all around goodness of 'A New Parallel' are coming back this coming weekend! I'd better see some reviews on this one lads.
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